You made me pancakes
I did the dishes after
Thank you for breakfast
I love to see you
In the morning when I wake
My beautiful girl
Flowers and candies
Neither can last for all time
But my love, it will
Monday, February 13, 2006
A Haiku for Your Love, or Lack Thereof
Posted by Big Morty at Monday, February 13, 2006
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4 comments:
Your haiku is sweet,
Sappy like molasses is.
From you, its sincere.
I am offended by your needless assault on a fine form of art.
uwjyskat
New readers are cool
To give offense is the point
Art is subjective
Some people are weird, taking offense to a perfectly legitimate use of the Haiku. You should read Redneck Haikus. That's some funny stuff.
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